Galick new trainer

Name: Galick

Male

Age:16

new trainer

johto,cherrygrove

looks:

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persanaltiy: Galick is very christmasic and scared of bees.He has a very rich famliy so he has alot of stuff.incuding cars

history:alot. he has a snobish addutie from gettiing everything. galick doesnt care for walking he justs drives to the gym. Galick got a pikachu that he evovled so he could fight but took it back and got a trade for pikachu

badges: 0

money:15,000$

Item: 5 Pokeballs, Beta Medal
pokemon;

Raichu

male

Moves

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exp:0

A few problems.

1/ First and second name please.

2/ More in personality please.

3/ More history please.

4/ You can't start with any badges, but I'll fix that.

5/ Mistake with money, you wrote 15, 00. But I'll change that too.

6/ With Raichu, please state personality, and also level

7/ With Raichu's level, since you're a new trainer, it has to be 12 or lower, and remember that Raichu can't learn attacks by level, so you might want to make him a Pikachu.

8/ Please state exactly how he got Pikachu.

9/ You get an items part and you get 5 Pokeballs, along with a Beta Medal since you took part in the festival, but I'll fix that too.

Fix that then I'll approve it. ^_^

Denied.

Reason: You haven't been on in ages and it's not the proper template and you didn't even fix one thing when you edited it to suit your problems.